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1. Or—imagine the horror for an herbivore

   I love the internal rhyme in this line.

   • Thanks for noticing (I hadn’t!). I was thinking, though, that for once a re-arrangement into short lines might help with the surprise ending, viz.:
     …Coyote? Bear? Or—
     imagine the horror for
     an herbivore—an attack
     of hay fever?

     • There’s a lot of vowel+r assonance in this one, isn’t there? Snorts, deer, bear, fever… It’s always fun when that sort of thing happens more or less on its own, without my conscious attention.

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