The Morning Porch

Dave Bonta October 8, 2013 2

Clear and cold. The leaves at the end of the porch have gathered into a dense crowd, as if for warmth. A raven’s distant croak.

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Louise
11 years ago Permalink

I like it. Feels like sudden cold air and the turning of the season. Love the use of visual symbols.
1. Dave Bonta
  11 years ago Permalink
  
  Thanks. Not so subtle, I thought, but glad you found it effective anyway!

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