Dim sun. Trunks and branches still sheathed in ice glisten, surrounded by duller companions like glitterati on the streets of New York.
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Dim sun. Trunks and branches still sheathed in ice glisten, surrounded by duller companions like glitterati on the streets of New York.
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I see you do indeed use similes, and I love this one!
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Thanks, Jean. Yes, sometimes you have to go with the obvious.
Delighted to find your new microblog Trail Mix this morning!
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Dim Sun, Dim Sum
Dim sun, your soft
floury edges today
make me think of steam
clouds under a wicker basket,
pillowy mounds of dough
pulled into a pucker
atop sweet or savory buns…
Let the glittery icicles
on twigs and branches trade
their hard-edged, fishnet-
stockinged gossip above us all,
here at an oilcloth-covered table
in a little hole in the wall
where the air is fragrant
with ginger and scallions
and dark plum sauce.
– Luisa A. Igloria
02 04 2011
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LOL. I love “fishnet-/stockinged gossip”. This poem is making me very hungry.
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Me too! Your fault for visually suggesting dim sum!
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Yeah, but I’m guessing it’s going to be a lot easier for you to satisfy this craving in D.C. than it is for me out here in the sticks.
Hope you’re enjoying the MFA, by the way. I thought hard about going this year, but the thought of being surrounded by so many poets made me break out in hives.
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I’m on a train back as we “speak”– AWP this year was as usual overwhelming and overstimulating. I attended two meetings, spoke at two panels, had two wonderful reunions over great meals with two old friends, one of them my old college prof in philosopy – I hadn’t seen himsince ’92.
No opportunity to go find dim sum in DC.
We could in Chicago’s Chinatown next year if you want to be on a panel on collaborative poetries… What say you?
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Yes, I would go to Chicago in winter to eat dim sum!
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Also, if that panel gets approved, I would want to try some more active collaborations along the lines of our letter-poem linked verse series. (Not necessarily using comment threads — we could try Google docs, too.)
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You’re on! Would this be something Beth would want to do too?
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You mean be on the panel, or write collaboratively? I don’t know. But if you need ideas of who else to include in such a panel, browse qarrtsiluni’s Mutating the Signature issue from two years ago. http://qarrtsiluni.com/category/mutating-the-signature/ (This was before we instituted issue TOCs, so you’ll have to do a bit of scrolling, I’m afraid.)
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Look out for the Stinky Tofu in the hemlock tree.
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Chodofu is the food of the gods, my friend.