Dawn: a thin band of vivid pink. I glance down at my coffee, and when I look back it’s gone, the sky’s gray. A titmouse’s monotonous song.
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Dawn: a thin band of vivid pink. I glance down at my coffee, and when I look back it’s gone, the sky’s gray. A titmouse’s monotonous song.
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You probably know the name for that band of pink (and blue) but it’s so lovely I’ll leave it anyway for those who might not – the Belt of Venus.
I captured one with the perigee moon last year from my balcony – there are far more stunning photos if you do a google image search for Belt of Venus. It occurs at both sunrise and sunset, and the blue near the horizon is the earth’s shadow.
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I didn’t know that. Very good to know! This band may or may not qualify, though — it was the kind that occurs because there’s a thinnner layer in the clouds near the horizon.
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Ephemera
Dawn: a thin band of vivid pink. I glance down at my coffee,
and when I look back it’s gone, the sky is gray.
In the crowded station, volatile citrus spray.
I look around but cannot find the orange rind.
New girl at the coffee shop– Between taking orders, her brown
barrette glints like a clipped accent from somewhere else.
Where did the four green slices of starfruit go?
The pineapples on the serving plate are silent.
Last night, in my living room, the poet who wrote of temples
and butterflies, slid off his sandals and padded barefoot to the dinner table.
~ Luisa A. Igloria
02 09 2011
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In the winter? That’s taking it a bit far.
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He did too. Ask him.
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Oh, I don’t doubt that he did. I just question his wisdom. “To everything there is a season.”
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Jessie’s wearing a knit belt,
a band of vivid pink.
She whistles the beginning of something
again and again.
I glance down at my coffee.
When I look back up
she’s pulled on a gray sweater
and gone to look at the sky.
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This made me smile in two ways at once. Well done!
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Things That Make Me Smile
In Two Ways At Once
Flounced ruffles
Swagger-me boots
Lost and found capers
A long drink
of something mint
Dimpled time
A lie-in
Bright circlet
inside a small hour
Homing like
the hummingbird
That little dish
of nectar partly
hidden in
the leaves–
02 09 2011
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Jessie’s wearing boots of mint. She whistles the hummingbird out of the leaves in another story, one without curved bakery cases and metal tubes that hiss into small cups. In this dimpled time, nectar drips from gold cages, & a sad lawyer feeds himself to a lie-in. She hums & taps her toe. She homes in.
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Bedtime Story
But what if she hasn’t learned how to whistle? Will the hummingbird come out of hiding, will it part the leaves for a pucker, for a yodel, or if she crooned? Will it flutter its wings more rapidly than eyelashes? Summer is a long way away. Summer is stripes of vermilion, the plumage of birds of paradise. She looks out where the wind has started sifting fine snow again. The birdbath is an upturned bundt pan ringed by tiny marzipan leaves. Knock on its sides and the echo circles the garden. When it’s cold, we want to suck everything down to the marrow, forgetting the fire in the feathers, the smolder in the song. The sad lawyer in the canopy bed stops alternately tossing in the sheets and sitting up to smooth them. She regales him with stories, pretending she is Sheherazade: short of the endings, before daylight, she braids their ends and coils them flat as coins. Laughing, she tells him he must find them himself. She hides them underneath the mattress, then wishes she were a florin, a ducat, a coronet dollar piece.
02 09 2011
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That ache in the lungs
on a very cold dawn—
I almost enjoy it.
The blue near the horizon
is the earth’s own shadow.
Half-in, half-out,
a leaf flaps
from the frozen birdbath.
I pluck an unsightly hair
from the bridge of my nose.
In the post office window,
the clerk & I compared
ten dollar bills.
1001 spam emails
vanish with one click.
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That ache in the lungs
on a very cold dawn,
that blue near the horizon–
Across the counterpane
I’ve chased my shadow
half-in, half-out of sleep–
I fill the chamber with ink
and the nib presses
against creamy paper–
Ink color named after a battle,
cornfields bordering
Antietam creek–
That ache in the wake
of language, words like pennants
marking what can’t ever be held–
As in a roomful of people
where I find I’m still always
speaking to you–
02 10 2011
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(Thanks for the poem-dance! Good night.)
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(“Poem dance” is a term coined by Sharon Brogan at Watermark blog for this kind of exchange, although these poems borrow enough from each other to qualify as a sequence, too.)
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I like the poem dance. Hope you’ll have more of it.
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