The rain’s stopped, and high winds rearrange the clouds, holes opening and closing as if in a game of chance: guess which one hides the sun.
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The rain’s stopped, and high winds rearrange the clouds, holes opening and closing as if in a game of chance: guess which one hides the sun.
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Letter to Fortune
Dear hand that shakes the cup
and rolls the dice out on the table,
what is the luck of the draw today?
The trees stir their bagfuls of newly-
minted green. Somewhere, water tinkles
like silver. Even the hairs on your chest
are brushed with copper. Put on your crisp
white shirt, snap on your black bow tie, do
up your cummerbund and tails; and deal.
I never said I’d stopped playing. High winds
rearrange the clouds, having learned too
about this game of chance: your turn now
to guess which one is hiding the sun.
~ Luisa A. Igloria
04 17 2011
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http://koshtra.blogspot.com/2011/04/infusion-of-red.html
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Just a note to affirm these morning lines not only for their intrinsic value, but as a kind of poetic pump-priming.
Since a trip to Mississippi two years ago I’ve been carrying the title “Delta Rain” around with me. I knew it needed to be a poem, but it went nowhere. Now, after weeks of 140-character descriptive lines, it’s taken on life and is included in my new post “Waiting for Rain”.
While I may not continue posting these lines, I believe I’m going to keep up the discipline. There’s great value to it. Oh – and a lot of fun, too!
And thanks for the info on the Villanelle. I really appreciate it.
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THE PEBBLE UNDER
“Quick, guess where the pebble is,
and if you do, you will be happy!”
What if this were the only wager
in a game of chance of opening
and closing a cup over a rolling
pebble, not unlike the hide-‘n-seek
the sun plays now with clouds
darting heither and thither with
winds blowing from all directions?
Will you take it? Will I dare?
What have we got to lose,
one way or another? I hold
your hand and you squeeze mine,
a signal to choose the arrant hiding cup,
and voila: I miss it. Happiness, too?
Happy is as happy does: you are
with me to roll the dice. Would I care
willy-nilly where happiness lies?
Under the cup where the pebble
has custody of nothing, least of all
my joie d’vivre — you, my love,
who will be my ransom should I
lose this game of chance?
—Albert B. Casuga
04-17-11
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Dave – what a fun way to describe this sort of weather! Enjoying all your nature observations.
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